YOU CAUGHT ME WHEN I WAS FALLING
AND GAVE ME HOPE
I was grounded, solid, firm and unmovable, like a leaf blade strongly fastened to a branch by its petiole. Knowing my roles and responsibilities well, I stayed focused in delivering my tasks and achieving my goals. I was satisfied with the fruits I bear and continued to work passionately to the best of my abilities.
One day, a wind blew. It was so fierce that it stripped me off the branch and I saw myself floating, going in any direction that the wind could take me. I had no control. I was useless. How could a leaf make sugar when it is detached? I thought it was the end of me.
But then something happened. A hand reached out and caught me in the middle of the storm. It handled me gently and protected me from the wind. I felt its warm embrace and I knew I was in good hands.
He gently placed me in a new environment and I found myself growing roots like a succulent. He kept me indoors under his watchful eyes and I have never been more happier.
Life is good, always good. Just when we think we've reached the end of our journeys, new ones begin.
About the Creator
Emos Sibu Poriei (Kaya)
I love reading and researching to gain inspiration and ideas. I appreciate those who write and I hope I can inspire you with my writings too.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters


Comments (14)
"Nicely explained!"
Awesome!!!
Congratulations dear, you did a very wonderful job
🎉 Congrats on getting Top Story!!! 🥳 Well deserved and super proud of you! 🙌✨👏
I loved the perspective of being the life of a leaf. I’ve done this once, as a lipstick—but feel inspired once again. Thank you & congrats !!
Thank you so much Vocal Team. #GRATEFUL 🙏
love how there's no high vocabulary or deep similes yet it's so beautiful and resonates so well. Congrats!!!
Very good work, congrats 👏
A beautiful poem, definitely a top story, thankyou for sharing xx
Congratulations on Top Story 🥳
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Really loved this piece! I’ve just started writing on Vocal too. Would love it if you could check out my recent story and share your thoughts.
Beautiful
Ah looks like he rescued you at the right time. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️