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"๐šˆ๐š˜๐šž ๐šŠ๐š›๐šŽ ๐š–๐š˜๐š›๐šŽ ๐š๐š‘๐šŠ๐š— ๐šŽ๐š—๐š˜๐šž๐š๐š‘"

๐“ข๐“พ๐“ท๐“ผ๐“ฑ๐“ฒ๐“ท๐“ฎ ๐“–๐“ธ๐“ต๐“ญ ๐“ฆ๐“ช๐“ผ ๐“—๐“ฎ๐“ป ๐“ข๐“ธ๐“พ๐“ต #18

By Lou HolzPublished 8 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
"๐šˆ๐š˜๐šž ๐šŠ๐š›๐šŽ ๐š–๐š˜๐š›๐šŽ ๐š๐š‘๐šŠ๐š— ๐šŽ๐š—๐š˜๐šž๐š๐š‘"
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They told you that phrase like a bandage -

like you could stitch it over the gash

where the world carved less-than into your ribs.

"You're more than enough," they said.*ike a compliment could tune out failure.

*

โ€œResilience,โ€ they call it.

But what they mean is

learn to love the taste of ash

because the fire isnโ€™t leaving.

*

The gods are watching.

Not the ones in temples,

but the ones with neckties and empty eyes,

sitting in boardrooms,

handing out judgments

like cheap sweets wrapped in expectations.

*

"You are meant for more," they said.

"Prove it. Bleed for it."

And we do-

every perfect score,

every flawless smile,

every swallowed sob.

we become 'enough'

*

But the thing is -

life doesnโ€™t care what you bring.

It burns what you give it,

no matter how holy.

Even if we offer everything,

Everything we have to give.

still they will ask,

"Is that all?"

*

See, the world doesn't want you whole.

It wants you useful.

It wants you palatable.

*

And 'being enough' is like

the smoke to the fire of life -

forever changing and flowing

in and out consistency

You'll never catch it.

*

So instead of flailing at fumes

Enjoy the heat of flames while you can

Before your weak, mortal bones give in

and succumb to the weight of cold

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Notes:

I'm getting terrible at writing consistently

I promise i'm trying, fingers crossed i'll have time to post tomorrow

sad poetrysurreal poetryFree Verse

About the Creator

Lou Holz

Font guide:

(All my stories are in fonts so you can tell them apart)

๐™ฟ๐šŠ๐š›๐š ๐š˜๐š ๐šŠ ๐š‹๐šž๐š—๐š๐š•๐šŽ/๐š™๐š›๐š˜๐š–๐š™๐š๐šŽ๐š ๐š™๐š˜๐šŽ๐š–

๐“ข๐“ฒ๐“ท๐“ฐ๐“ต๐“ฎ ๐“Ÿ๐“ธ๐“ฎ๐“ถ๐“ผ

๐•Š๐•ฅ๐• ๐•ฃ๐•š๐•–๐•ค

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Suit up and read - it's gonna be legen - wait for it - dary.

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  • Caroline Craven8 months ago

    Can feel the words burning in this - awesome!! Youโ€™re right though, sometimes it feels like the more you do, the less youโ€™re appreciated.

  • "life doesnโ€™t care what you bring. It burns what you give it," The way that is so true hit me so hard. Loved your poem!

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