YOᑌ ᗩᖇE ᗷEᗩᑌTIᖴᑌᒪ
GOᗪ ᑕᖇEᗩTEᗪ YOᑌ ᖴOᖇ ᗩᗰᗩᘔIᑎG TᕼIᑎGᏕ!
[̲̅Y]𝚘𝚞’𝚟𝚎 𝚋𝚞𝚒𝚕𝚝 𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚎𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚌𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚕𝚎𝚜
[̲̅O]𝚏 𝚍𝚎𝚕𝚒𝚌𝚊𝚝𝚎 𝚜𝚊𝚗𝚍
[̲̅U]𝚙𝚘𝚗 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚝𝚞𝚛𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚎𝚗𝚝 𝚜𝚑𝚘𝚛𝚎𝚜 𝚘𝚏 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚏𝚎
⏳
[̲̅A]𝚠𝚊𝚢 𝚏𝚛𝚘𝚖 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚏𝚛𝚊𝚐𝚒𝚕𝚎
[̲̅R]𝚒𝚜𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚝𝚒𝚍𝚎 𝚘𝚏 𝚏𝚊𝚝𝚎’𝚜 𝚑𝚊𝚗𝚍𝚜, 𝚊𝚗𝚍
[̲̅E]𝚟𝚎𝚗 𝚊𝚠𝚊𝚢 𝚏𝚛𝚘𝚖 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚝𝚛𝚒𝚏𝚎
⏳
[̲̅B]𝚞𝚝 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚑𝚊𝚜 𝚊 𝚠𝚊𝚢 𝚘𝚏
[̲̅E]𝚛𝚘𝚍𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚍𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚜
[̲̅A]𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚞𝚛𝚗𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚖
[̲̅U]𝚗𝚍𝚎𝚛 𝚊𝚐𝚊𝚒𝚗
[̲̅T]𝚎𝚊𝚛𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚕𝚒𝚟𝚎𝚜 𝚊𝚙𝚊𝚛𝚝 𝚊𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚜
[̲̅I]𝚗 𝚝𝚒𝚖𝚎 𝚠𝚎 𝚑𝚎𝚊𝚕, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚞𝚗𝚋𝚛𝚘𝚔𝚎𝚗 𝚠𝚎 𝚖𝚎𝚗𝚍 ~
[̲̅F]𝚊𝚛 𝚏𝚛𝚘𝚖 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚑𝚘𝚛𝚎
[̲̅U]𝚗𝚍𝚎𝚛 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚌𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 𝚘𝚏 𝚏𝚊𝚒𝚝𝚑, 𝙶𝚘𝚍’𝚜 𝙻𝚘𝚟𝚎, 𝚜𝚝𝚛𝚘𝚗𝚐 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚞𝚝𝚊𝚋𝚕𝚎
[̲̅L]𝚘𝚞𝚍𝚕𝚢 𝚙𝚛𝚘𝚌𝚕𝚊𝚒𝚖𝚜 𝚒𝚗 𝚝𝚛𝚒𝚞𝚖𝚙𝚑𝚊𝚗𝚝 𝚎𝚖𝚋𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚎, “MY CHILD, YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL!”
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"Any last words, cowboy?" "None you'd understand, sodbuster." "Funny. That's Marshall Sodbuster to you. But I meant some last nugget that would help us in the adjudication of the myriad offenses counted against you and your gang. I wasn't asking for penitence."
By Adam Diehl5 days ago in Fiction
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Beautiful poem you did this very well, great imagery. 
Encouragement in poetic verse is always a good remedy for any sullen mood. Your mission is achieved with this one.
Such a beautiful acrostic you've written here! Great work RM!
“Immutable” the key to our hope. Love the references RM. excellent poem. 🥰😎
This was so uplifting! Such a beautiful acrostic! Thank you so much for writing this. I needed it!
Fabulous Piece✨👍💚📝👌😉
From beginning to end I enjoyed this poem. It's beautiful. Your word choice is fitting, the visual is as well. "Careful castles" caught me immediately. The poem flowed effortlessly. I love it so much that I read it again!
Absolutely beautiful and very inspiring. Good to see you back!
That’s true! Great work! Everything’s gravy!