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Yellow Bloom

Haiku

By Andrea Corwin Published 2 years ago 1 min read

jonquil yellow bloom

smiles upward to the sun

bumblebee grateful

Haikunature poetry

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Andrea Corwin

🐘Wildlife 🌳 Environment 🥋3rd° See nature through my eyes

Poetry, fiction, horror, life experiences, and author photos. Written without A.I. © Andrea O. Corwin

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Like the children of the sun, looking always the master.

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Nice haiku and beautiful photo!

  • Jay Kantor2 years ago

    Dear Ac - I feel the need to tell you. We have a self appointed Planter-Pot Supervisor; Her name is Mz. PoTtyMouth. Perhaps you have one in your garden as well. She's not happy with us picking at flower potty varieties in her charge. I believe her superiority complex has derived from being so water-logged - and I don't think she's Bloomin' pretty at all! Though, she who attracts more Bees would be the Queen🐝Bee; don't you agree. You've had a lot to say lately - your pieces just flow. No Haiku's from me. I'm just a blabber mouth; I'm certain you've noticed. Best to you, j.in.l.a.

  • Awww, both the Haiku and photo were so lovely!

  • I thought about a nice perspective. Forgive me if you do not agree that. I think the flower is smiling upward to help the bee so that it can easily suck the nectar. So, flower is not looking down. Anyway, a good poem!

  • Hey Andrea, my little pup caught a bee yesterday! Bumbling, no less. Grateful she didn't get stung! Lovely haiku!

  • Lana V Lynx2 years ago

    Beautiful flowers and poem!

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