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Pleonasm

By Denise E LindquistPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Word Of The Day Poetry
Photo by Pawel Czerwinski on Unsplash

ple·o·nasm [ˈplēəˌnazəm]

noun

the use of more words than are necessary to convey meaning (e.g. see with one’s eyes), either as a fault of style or for emphasis. Bing

In the example in the photo above

or in other similar identifications of

conditions ending in disorder, how about club

We could have a club or even a pub.

Is disorder really necessary?

For me it is unnecessary.

Club and pub make as much sense

Maybe it is all me being dense

Oops I mean Denise

I need to remember my niece

is a therapist and may read this,

but this she very well may dis.

~

FASD is Fetal Alcohol Spectrum Disorder

Is disorder necessary there? In order

to explain what?

“Disorder: a state of confusion.”

That explains a lot!

Let’s shoot for another definition.

~

Using pleonasm, we may say

this is that. Saying the same thing okay.

Bipolar can be described as very confusing

Disorder is confusing to me as I am musing

Okay, not the best example of pleonasm

What is better?

This doesn’t have to be a letter!

~

Like the example above using eyes and see

You can say I hear with my ear

Is that a pleonasm or do I even understand the e.g.

It could be a steer

then cattle making it clear

that steers are cattle

I won’t tattle

about why a steer is no longer a bull

It may be too dull

How about a dry desert, burning fire, wet rain

Now those are pleonasms according to Bing.

Did this help me to learn or gain?

Probably not. No more about the pleonasm thing.

~~~~

First published by Write Under the Moon on medium.com

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About the Creator

Denise E Lindquist

I am married with 7 children, 28 grands, and 13 great-grandchildren. I am a culture consultant part-time. I write A Poem a Day in February for 8 years now. I wrote 4 - 50,000 word stories in NaNoWriMo. I write on Vocal/Medium daily.

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  • T. Licht2 years ago

    What a creative poem!

  • Oooo, I didn't know there was a term for this. Thank you so much for teaching me a new word! Also, I literally laughed out loud when I read this: "Maybe it is all me being dense Oops I mean Denise"

  • shanmuga priya2 years ago

    What a creative celebration of words!...just loved it.

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    What a poem as to a play on words. Creatively done.

  • Lana V Lynx2 years ago

    This made me chuckle. Great verse, Denise!

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    lol...but who is to say too much is too much or enough is enough?

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