.:without flow:.
a breakup love poem
By Gina C.Published about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
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Cascades of hormones swept me under.
Child of the sun—oblivious to
currents, undertows. Wild creeks
and rush of dreams we were—
arching brooks;
streams without backbones:
(then we became a)
rapid without
.:flow:.
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-Gina C. 🧚🏻♀️✨
About the Creator
Gina C.
Poet | Author | Architect of Worlds
Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose
Writing my novel!🧚🏻♀️🐉✨
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (10)
Your poem is very vivid. You make great use of imagery and metaphor. I can sense strong feelings as I read it. It also holds a deep message. I am intriuged by how well you have written this.
So fluid and full of striking imagery! Lovely writing, Gina!
Whoaaaa, this was so deep and packed a punch with love a few lines! You nailed this!
nice
I loved the flow, pun intended. Really good!
This is excellent, especially those last few lines. Well done. 🤗
Really fantastic imagery in this one!! A standout piece :)
wow I agree with lamar- that line is just something else.
lovely analogy for teh story
‘arching brooks; streams without backbones.’ Love that line. I think someone is enjoying this challenge, lol. Me too! 😁