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Bridesmaid-in-waiting
Smiling face awash with tears
A heart in breaking
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Comments (9)
Happiness is a lovely state
Wow, this open up emotion. Nice Job 👌
Oof, this hit me hard! It was just so emotional!
I love how you used the title and subtitle to add to the piece! Your last line definitely gives that twist that haiku are meant to have!
Beautiful Loryne 😀
Oh, you captured some big emotions here! So beautifully done and worded! ❤️
Beautiful piece. Well done.
Great poem! This is really beautiful.
Beautiful & sad!!! Left a loving heart!!!