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Withering Heights

Breakup Nonet

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Withering Heights
Photo by Marcin Krawczyński on Unsplash

From a lofty height you observe me

Life force extracted from my veins

Your presence overshadows

Drawing all things unto you

Eclipsed by your light

Where they wither

On the vine

To feed

You

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About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    “Where they wither to feed you”.. I see this a lot in life and I don’t much like it!! 👍

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Nice lines

  • I'm a little lost on this one. If you don't mind, could you please explain it to me? 😅😅

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