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WITH NOTHING MORE THAN SAND

At Last I'll Stop

By Margaret BrennanPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

WITH NOTHING MORE THAN SAND

* * * * *

I watched him work so feverishly

Digging up the sand.

Imagination was his ruler.

It had only to command.

*

The hole he dug was three feet deep,

With sand hills piled around.

He shaped a little sand seat

In the wall just off the ground.

*

Next, he took the tapered pail,

And filled it to the brim.

Then with a swinging motion,

He pounded out the rim.

*

With seashells now around the base

And a banner on the top,

He scraped the sand to form a door,

And said, "At last, I'll stop!"

*

Then as a last decision,

With the shovel in his hand,

He carved his name for all to see

On his castle in the sand.

inspirational

About the Creator

Margaret Brennan

I am a 78-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.

My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.

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  • Darkos2 years ago

    hahaha Enjoyed it Funny sandy shine castle poem!

  • Sid Aaron Hirji2 years ago

    Castle in the sand...The depth of that phrase how it can mean the life we built for ourselves, the investments we bring-very profound

  • This was just so beautiful! I loved it!

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    Loved this poem!!! One of my favs of yours

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    💞

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Sweet poem that brings back memories! 💖

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