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Winter's Scout

Before Autumn is done, Winter sends out its messenger.

By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 months ago β€’ 2 min read
Runner-Up in The Sound of First Frost Challenge
Winter's Scout
Photo by Adam Miller on Unsplash

There's a moment where the air starts to crisp.

It's after the mists have risen from saturating the land.

Colour vacations somewhere else,

Whilst the moisture which springs from warm Summer's exit,

Provides a modesty screen,

Behind which a change is taking place.

Look closely and you might see it-

But be prepared to get wet.

By iuliu illes on Unsplash

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There's a transition between Summer's brash vibrancy:

From its "in-yer-face-I'm-going-to-make-you-sweat-come-here-sweetheart"-edness

Which ends with the exhausted death cry of leaves, screaming crimson

And arguing orange, searchlight-yellow echoing sunshine at times,

Protesting initially, but then falling, falling, falling -

Twisty turny, floating down.

Before the fall as Fall takes hold

Look from afar if you can for the full effect

For if you go too close, you'll see the scars

From the brown scorches of Autumn's blowtorch,

Leaving patches and spots on the leaves' bright surface

As it ripped through forests and woods and parks

And watched excitedly as nature curled and recoiled, shrinking down

Eventually to vanish.

You can smell Autumn's approach if you sniff hard enough

Once Summer turns its back.

Watch it too in the frenzy of the wasps

As they rave crazedly around Summer's projects

Left, where they lie, left, on the ground,

Wantonly left,

Squelching, supine and still.

By Peter Muscutt on Unsplash

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These are the drinks and hor d'oeuvres before the main event.

The pre-show party vibes of anticipation.

Sky sharpens its blue and maple reddens the carpet

As clouds part, like curtains, and Frost descends.

The mist, once so pervasive, becomes solid sheets,

In an instant,

Crystalline-patterned manifestations materialise

Before our very eyes!

Snap!

The world becomes brittle, edged.

Its delineations are clear, surrounded with white,

The glass dust of ice falling

As Winter rubs it to powder through its slender firm fingers,

And it lands as falling shards of cold confetti

That coat and cluster and crunch.

Winter does not care where it lands

Nor does it care if you deem it treacherous.

It is there to draw out your caution and your care

To poke you and prod you with chilling certainty.

By Ales Krivec on Unsplash

But Winter will admit, darling, it is for show too.

Its brilliance is dazzling, designed to hurt eyes

That can't look away.

Gaze at the intricate patterns it creates:

Skeletal webs etched geometrically - the mark of its art.

Frost is like the Banksy of nature

Appearing suddenly, a graffiti installation to boggle the mind

Which draws wonder and surprise in its randomness.

There is a difference though:

Frost is fleeting,

Winter's scout.

Enjoy its clear cold lens while it lasts

And the steel shine it brings -

Before long it will become smothered too,

Like everything it's touched,

By the full onslaught of Winter's conquest.

By Lucie HoΕ‘ovΓ‘ on Unsplash

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  • Angie the Archivist πŸ“šπŸͺΆabout a month ago

    Enthralling take on the challenge… well deserved placing!πŸ†πŸ€© I especially like: β€œ Colour vacations somewhere else, Whilst the moisture which springs from warm Summer's exit, Provides a modesty screen, Behind which a change is taking place.β€πŸ˜Š

  • K.B. Silver 2 months ago

    congrats on the win πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‚

  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    Returning, Rachel, to congratulate you on your win❣πŸ₯°

  • Darkos2 months ago

    Congratulations on the Runner up !!!!:))))))

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Well done chum on placing!

  • Darkos2 months ago

    Woaw so Amazing Congratulations on Your Top Story Your piece is so verbally mesmerising in all kinds of beings and levels ❀️❀️😊😊😊You are a great observer and your way of writing is a masterpiece of your natural expression and being you do it in such a playful way expressing yourself fully into it all πŸ’₯🌸🩷it's a pleasure to read You !

  • Aarsh Malik2 months ago

    I love how you personify Summer Autumn and Winter with such distinct personalities it brings a playful yet powerful energy to the transitions.

  • Aspen Marie 2 months ago

    Wonderful work! I love these lines especially: β€œ As Winter rubs it to powder through its slender firm fingers, And it lands as falling shards of cold confetti” - what a lush visual you paint. Bravo!

  • Test2 months ago

    Circling back around Rachel, to say congrats on placing honourable mention this week!!

  • Archery Owl2 months ago

    Wow. I love how you created characters out of the seasons. It being a new realness

  • Test2 months ago

    I love the personification of frost "winter's scout" in this Rachel!! Congrats on Top Story!!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Hello Rachel Deeming! Am I... Ach can't do it lol... Well done chum, this was beautiful and a great entry. Great Top Story, Congratulations

  • congratulations on your top story...beautiful work, as always

  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    Returning to congratulate you on your top storyβ£πŸ‘πŸ₯³

  • Muhammad Saad 2 months ago

    Hello Rachel Deeming!! Am I ask a question please?

  • Denise E Lindquist2 months ago

    Great! Congratulations on your top story πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • D. J. Reddall2 months ago

    A wonderful meditation in verse on the shifting of seasons. Deftly done, Deeming!

  • Calvin London2 months ago

    Absolutely lovely, Rachel, and a big congratulations on your Top Story. Well done!!

  • Jay Kantor2 months ago

    BritBud ~ β€œBanksy..?” In-Yer-Face Backatcha..! CalBud

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    This does not seem like a British winter. Far too assertive! Like how I kind of expect winter to be. I love the modesty screen image!

  • Sandy Gillman2 months ago

    Beautifully written. I love how you captured the tension between Summer’s retreat and Winter’s arrival.

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