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Winter's Beginning

and autumn's end

By Luna JordanPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Winter's Beginning
Photo by Osman Rana on Unsplash

Something

has changed

in the atmosphere,

but you cannot

pinpoint what exactly

it is.

*

You only

know that

the world is

trying to tell

you something.

*

And it does.

*

Golden leaves

lie crispy on the dirt,

leaving the trees bare.

*

What was once

just a cool breeze

is now freezing,

or slowly edging in

that direction.

*

Grass looks lifeless.

Then again,

it always does to you.

*

Certain animals are hiding.

Some insects are, too.

You’re happier about

the insects leaving.

*

The soil is damp,

and the first traces

of frost begin to form

as the temperature

grows colder.

*

Is winter coming?

Or has it already arrived?

*

Shovels sit outside,

prepared for any

fallen snow to come.

*

You breathe in

and welcome the

season with open arms.

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  • Caitlin Charlton4 months ago

    A chilling opening to a beautiful atmospheric season. Then you hit me with my own thoughts or is it your thoughts...The world is probably trying to tell me something. But what 🤔 Oh?! I love the slow creeping description. Hmm is this the philosophical Luna we know or... Is this just... Hmm... I'm loving it. But not like McDonald's. 'Has it already arrived' I am very connected to this line. These cold nights I've been having. I've been wondering the same. You should've seen us last night. Grabbing all the blankets our storage could spit at us. This was fantastic. Nicely done Luna 🤗❤️

  • Is winter coming? Gotta ask Jon Snow, lol. Loved your poem!

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