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Will You Keep Our Secret Mr Moon

A letter to the Moon

By Calvin LondonPublished 3 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Mr. Moon, I look at you,

And see you looking back at me,

I know you must have seen a thing or two,

But will you keep our secret?

πŸŒœπŸŒœπŸŒ›πŸŒ›

From my window, I peer out,

And see you sometimes smile.

πŸŒ—πŸŒ—πŸŒ—

Do you ever wonder what it's all about?

Or do you really not want to know?

πŸŒ”πŸŒ”πŸŒ”

I bet you have some tales to tell,

About the things you’ve seen.

πŸŒ‘πŸŒ‘πŸŒ‘

Let’s not forget their personal,

So, I need you not to tell.

🌜🌜🌜

Maybe I should shut the blind,

But where’s the fun in that?

πŸŒ—πŸŒ—πŸŒ—

If people look and really mind,

Is that because you let them see?

🌝🌝🌝

Mr. Moon I look at you.

And see you looking back at me.

I know you must have seen a thing or two,

But will you keep our secret?

πŸŒœπŸŒœπŸŒ›πŸŒ›

[Author’s note: This is the second poem I have written that I describe as a β€œsandwich poem.” The format for this type of poem is that the first and the last stanzas are quatrains and are the same with the same rhyme ABAC (i.e. like two pieces of bread). In between are couplets of any format you like or any number of stanzas you like, as if you were making a sandwich. In mine, there are six couples, each representing one of six possible ingredients. The first line of each pair of couplets rhymes with the first line of the next, i.e. (AB AC), (DE DF), (GH GI)].

Till next time,

Calvin

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About the Creator

Calvin London

I write fiction, non-fiction and poetry about all things weird and wonderful, past and present. Life is full of different things to spark your imagination. All you have to do is embrace it - join me on my journey.

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  • Denise E Lindquist2 months ago

    I enjoy reading new formats! Thank you! I did attempt a sandwich poem the last time you wrote one. Good one for the challenge!πŸ˜‰πŸ’–

  • Marie381Uk 3 months ago

    So fab to read. Love your poetry β™¦οΈπŸ¦‹β™¦οΈπŸ†πŸ†πŸ†

  • Another sandwich poem hehehehe. Looks like Mr Moon is a peeping Tom, lol. Loved your poem!

  • Andrea Corwin 3 months ago

    Hahaha - what secret? πŸ€” Maybe a follow up that reveals the secret with the moon…don’t keep us in suspense LOL. πŸŒ“ Calvin I think you meant β€œthey’re” not their. πŸ˜‰

  • Sandy Gillman3 months ago

    I really enjoyed this one. It’s playful and imaginative, but there’s also a lovely intimacy in how you speak to the moon like an old friend. 🌝

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