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Wild Warning

An Ekphrastic Sonnet

By D. J. ReddallPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
Odd Nerdrum, "The Black Cloud," 1986

I suspect that you will not believe me

You will dismiss me as a silly fool

I do not understand why you can't see

What I watch breaking every, ancient rule

Supine was I, as you are now: cocooned

I saw only the old, familiar sky

Or the backs of my eyelids, all festooned

With flashing patterns that reason defy

But I was roused from my idle dreaming

By sweaty, nervous, dreadful sensations

To spot yonder a new darkness seeming

Strange and deep enough to eat nations

Drowse through my wild warning as you see fit

The cloud eats those who don't believe in it

Ekphrastic

About the Creator

D. J. Reddall

I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.

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  • Lightning Bolt ⚡11 months ago

    Your choice of words it fascinating. I smiled just to see cocooned paired with festooned. ⚡💙⚡

  • Gabriel Huizenga11 months ago

    At once charmingly mystical and deeply grounded and relevant- masterful, D.J.!

  • Sean A.11 months ago

    You took a strange image and made it surrealistically timely. Great job!

  • Oh wow, like I know the word drowsy but I never thought that it might have come from drowse! Supine was also a new word for me. Loved your poem!

  • Rachel Deeming11 months ago

    "The cloud eats those who don't believe in it" - that is a great line. Deftly done. Dark days ahead, D.J. or if we sit up, maybe not.

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