Wild Fire
Breakup nonet challenge
By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Christopher Burns on Unsplash
Elusive, Illusory, Unreal
Frantically grasping ebbing smoke
Like a wildfire you entered
Consumed my entire world
Burned out my whole soul
Left but kindling
Shattered heart
Ashes
Strewn
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Deeply felt 💔
This was soooo relatable! I freaking loved it!