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But I never thought of it that way,
A love that stayed.
Why did you feel like you wasted,
Love~
You made me feel,
Worthless~
You showed me that I wasn't,
A burden to keep,
I found our truth to be,
Hope~
Which I know you never understood,
You never saw it the same way I did.
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Authors Notes:
Hope you enjoyed my Inverse poem! โฃ๏ธ
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical
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The reverse โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Love is a double edged sword, your poem captured it beautifully. well said Kodah.
Very beautifully done. ๐
Sometimes people just don't feel the same way we do about things or one another and it's so heartbreaking. Sending you lots of love and hugs โค๏ธ
Poignant and beautiful โค๏ธ
Sad but beautiful poetry.