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Why did Icarus | Fall from the Heavens when the | Air gets cold up high?

I saw a cartoon | Where the characters thought wrong. | Mountains can be cold.

By Thavien YliasterPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Why did Icarus | Fall from the Heavens when the | Air gets cold up high?
Photo by Daniel Mirlea on Unsplash

Closer to the Sun

Yet, it's colder higher up

Our science was wrong

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    I liked the way you drew the reader to the conclusion in that last line. Great work!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Nice one

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    This is great! It really makes you think 😳✨ Awesome job, Thavien!!

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