Whispers of Venice: Echoes Across the Canals
Unveiling the Splendor of La Serenissima
Gondolas glide like whispers on Venice's canals,
Where legends intertwine in timeless tales.
Over the lapping waves, bridges stand tall,
Echoing history in every cobblestone trail.
Unmatched elegance rises in palatial grace,
Facade adorned in hues of shimmering gold.
By day or night, Venice's lanes embrace
The dance of shadows, stories yet untold.
Hearts lay bare amidst the masked throng,
In the carnival's surreal, enchanting song.
The piazza resonates with joy and cheer,
Venice welcomes all, drawing near.
As the sun sets, painting skies with hues untold,
Venice glows, a gem of stories untold.
A river of dreams, forever in motion,
A timeless beauty, an eternal devotion.
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Wonderful
Wonderful
Beautifully written
Beautifully written with perfect count, rhythm, and rhyme scheme. Well done!!! I have subscribed to you.
Interesting and delicious content. Keep posting more
Venice is surely honoured by your piece.
Enjoyed this one a lot. I’ve longed to visit the city since childhood, and your poem only hastens my urgency.
Beautiful Poem.
Great poem 👏
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Wow! I love the route you chose to take (no pun intended) with this piece. It's beautifully written :)
Wow amazing Venice 😮 well written 👏 thanks for sharing