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Whispers of Serenity

- a feedback poem

By kulandaivelPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Whispers of Serenity
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In fields of gold, where tranquility blooms,

A poem is born, escaping life's gloom.

With just one hundred words, its story unfolds,

Simple yet profound, as the tale it beholds.

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Amidst gentle breezes, it finds its voice,

Invoking emotions, allowing hearts to rejoice.

Each word chosen meticulously, with care,

Crafting a tapestry of beauty rare.

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Through valleys of sorrow, it guides the way,

Infusing hope, like sunlight at play.

Readability flourishes, a river so clear,

Drawing the reader, ever near.

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With grace and elegance, it dances along,

A melody of words, tender and strong.

Feedback we seek, from those who partake,

Does it resonate, this poem we make?

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Does it stir the soul, awaken the mind,

Or leave you yearning, for something to find?

Your thoughts we treasure, like precious gold,

Shaping our craft, as we unfold.

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So let your feedback flow, like rivers untamed,

As we humbly learn, our spirits untamed.

For in your reflections, we see our growth,

Creating a symphony, like a poet's oath.

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In just one hundred words, simplicity thrives,

Crafting a masterpiece, where beauty derives.

With your help, we find our clarity,

In this realm of poetry, whispers of serenity.

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About the Creator

kulandaivel

"Creative writer sharing passions for travel, music, and nature through relatable and inspiring stories. Aiming to engage audience and bring positivity to the world. Excited to be a part of the Vocal community."

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