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A break, a rift, a sudden parting,
Whispers of love now just echoes,
Hearts once bound, now drift apart,
Silent tears, a farewell,
Memories linger,
Empty spaces,
Lonely nights,
Goodbye,
Gone.
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Mara Edwards
I have published four or five new stories that are all challenge entries! Would love for you to read!
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Compelling and original writing
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Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (2)
This is a beautiful poem.
Sad and relatable. I love how your lines shrink down to the one word, "Gone." for your ending. That was a good choice.