Whispers Beneath the Sun
A Gentle Tale of Letting Go and Growing Brighter
Whispers Beneath the Sun
A Gentle Tale of Letting Go and Growing Brighter
The field had always been hers. Not by deed or name, but by memory. She had come here as a child, skipping through tall grass and golden wheat, her laughter carried on the wind like song. It was where she had whispered her dreams to the sky and buried her first heartbreak beneath the old willow tree.
Now, she stood still in the same field, the wind much quieter, the air thick with the scent of late summer. The sun, dipping low, cast long shadows that danced like ghosts of yesterday. She could feel them — all the versions of herself that had once passed through here. The girl who hoped. The girl who hurt. The one who healed.
In her hand, she held a single dandelion — white, soft, fragile. It had grown wild at her feet, a quiet survivor among the fading grasses. She smiled at it, gently cupping it like a secret. The world was louder now than it had ever been when she was young. But in this place, silence still hummed sweetly beneath the surface, just loud enough to hear what really mattered.
She closed her eyes and made no wish — not this time. Wishes had their place, and hers had been many. Some had come true. Some had drifted away. But now she no longer needed wishes to move forward. Just breath. Just steps.
With the softest exhale, she released the seeds into the wind.
Tiny white stars, they floated up, caught in the golden light, dancing higher and higher. She watched them until they disappeared, not sad, not afraid, just aware — that every release is both an ending and a beginning.
Once, she would have chased them. Now, she let them go.
She turned toward the path that led away from the field, a narrow trail barely visible between the tall grass. She had walked it many times before, but this time felt different. Not heavier, but more honest. Her heart was still full — not of regret, but of remembrance. Every step forward carried a story behind it.
She thought of him — the one she had met beneath the willow. How their hands had fit so easily together. How his laugh had made her feel like spring inside. And how, when the seasons changed, they hadn’t known how to hold on. He had gone before the frost, leaving words unspoken and letters unread.
There had been tears, of course. Long nights curled into pillows, wondering what she lacked. But time, that gentle sculptor, had shaped her sorrow into something else. Not joy, exactly. Not quite peace. But understanding.
She had learned that some people are meant to be chapters, not endings. And that didn’t make them any less beautiful.
The wind picked up slightly, tugging at the edges of her coat. She smiled again — half wistful, half real. The sun brushed her cheek like a kiss, and for a moment, she imagined it was him. Not haunting her, but wishing her well.
Behind her, the seeds danced still — not seeds anymore, but beginnings in the making.
Ahead, the sky widened, painted in strokes of orange and lavender. The world was waiting.
She walked.
Not with certainty, but with quiet courage.
Because there are moments in life when you do not need to know what comes next. You only need to trust that you’re ready for it.
The path bent slightly, curving toward a hill she had never climbed before. She looked back once — at the willow, at the field, at the place that had held her sorrow gently, like a friend — and then, with the kindest farewell, she whispered: “Thank you.”
Then she climbed.
At the top, she stood tall, the world below her stitched with rivers and roads, homes and hopes. The sun touched the horizon, setting not in sadness, but in promise. She opened her arms just slightly, as if to catch the light.
Somewhere, far below, the last of the dandelion seeds settled into soil.
And in time, they would grow.
Just like her.
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By Muhammad Saad 4 months ago in Poets
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