While They’re Still Here
Love and make a fuss. Show how much you care

While They’re Here
Hold their hands while they still reach,
listen close while voices teach.
Laugh with them, don’t wait to cry,
love them now—before goodbye.
Not in marble, not in stone,
show them while they’re not alone.
Warm embraces, stories told,
memories made before they’re old.
Tears won’t matter once they’re gone,
give them light to walk upon.
Not just flowers on the ground—
be their joy while they’re around.
I wish my Mam & Dad was still here
Life’s never the same when they are gone,
One last chat, one last smile or kiss,
I would give everything up for 10 minutes more.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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