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while i wait for you

five senses, (plus one), in a poem

By Gina C.Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Tonight, my dreams are a xylophone of misarranged treble clefs. To catch the sound of your breath, the shell of my ear becomes a butterfly net. Then, along the pine—and the sigh—of the moonrise, your liminal ghost speaks to mine.

While I wait for you to fall toward my arms' soft nest, I hug the velvety molecules of you with the warmth of my chest, hoping your air enamors of my floury, dense earthiness—and your wings grow an ache to bud vines.

And while you drink up your cup of celestial wine, I'll eat grapes here on Earth, until you decide that it's time to (sip milk from) the bottle that's me—my design.

I imagine you smell just like jasmine—

I see your smile in every cloud in the sky.

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-Gina C. 🧚‍♀️✨

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Gina C.

Poet | Author | Architect of Worlds

Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose

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  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    Very nice vocabulary usage!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Such a stunning piece, Gina! So many vivid sensory images!!

  • "Tonight, my dreams are a xylophone of misarranged treble clefs. To catch the sound of your breath, the shell of my ear becomes a butterfly net." Whoaaaa, I couldn't stop rereading that part! It was brilliance in it's finest form! Like it blew my mind! You're sooooo such a talented poet! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Beautifully written! So heartfelt!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh my heart. I think it broke a little while I smiled through my tears. Just a raw, heartfelt piece :) Loved it so much.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful work, my friend. Well done.

  • Diani Alvarengaabout a year ago

    So incredible, Gina!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Brilliantly written!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    This is incredible, Gina! So many tears welling up with each line...oh, my heart. Love and hugs!

  • Jay Kantorabout a year ago

    Good God Gc - Drink milk from me; you are so sensual - as I jump into a 'Cold Shower' - I've just written a story re; attraction: We always have different slants but it's fun to relate in our own ways..! - My Respect - Jk.in.l.a.

  • Lovely words

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Always so elegant and visceral..beautiful work, Gina

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