Which Way Is Out
Poem

There once was a woman named Sara and a woman named Kate
Who had a freakish kind of fan fetish and a longitute of hate
Their symbiotic chatter was a little much to stand especially with the ridiculous that held their hand
Sorry little sides, nothing personal but I'm not so inclined
I like only men very hard and with a strong mind
But since you need a little something to go on, to feed your uniforms, here's a poem to chew on and nothing more
I sorta hope you choke on your lies, and that all the things that you destroyed are waiting in your judgment, and hope a crushed vine
May the decade or more of pure misery you've shared be your ultimate entangling snare that sets no winds to sail by, and fortune be your drift
I didn't need a guardian, I wanted a way out of this.
About the Creator
Canuck Scriber Lisa Lachapelle
Vocal Top Story 13 times + Awesome Story 2X. Author of Award Winning Novel Small Tales and Visits to Heaven XI Edition + books of poems, etc. Also in lit journal, anthology, magazine + award winning entries.


Comments (3)
Kick-butt writing Lisa! Get it gurl! 🎉💪🏾
So this is about two women. 'Freak fetish and a longitude of hate'. I like how you showed their double minds here. The rhyme was smooth too. 'You like only men'. A mysterious statement, which made me want to read more. Theres a line filled with your begrudging kindness. But then the one following that, had 'choke' in it. 🤣 That was perfect. I hope they heard it loud and clear that you didn't need a guardian. This was fantastic Lisa 🤗❤️
I love it, Lisa. You have a distinctive style! I am subscribed to many poets who are friends and it seems like most keep there lines pretty short. I do too, at times. I like the longer thoughts, the way you tell a story, at the same time you still rhyme. My mind is not hard or strong though, so I'll understand if you don't like me.😉 😂 🤣 ⚡💙 Bill⚡