When You Left Like a Sunset
You didn’t say goodbye — you just faded beautifully out of my sky.
🕰️ 5. Before You Go
You didn’t say goodbye.
You just left like sunsets do — without warning.
For days, I waited for a message, a word, anything.
But silence became your voice.
I walk past the park where we first met.
The bench still remembers us, even if you don’t.
I tell myself it’s fine, that some love stories end quietly.
Yet, every time I close my eyes, I still see you walking away.
Not with anger, but with peace.
And that’s what hurts the most — that peace doesn’t include me.
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Sudais Zakwan
Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions
Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.
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