
We were always the spark,
a brief, bright defiance
against the unlit hush of before.
Our laughter was flint striking stone,
each day a kindling,
every promise wrought
in the language of flame.
But endings arrive like embers,
red strands thinning into absence,
intentions collapsing in on themselves.
We were never the firewood
we were the blaze,
the fever,
the longing to be more
than what we could hold.
Now, the world is a circle
of cooling rings,
where yesterday’s passion curls inward,
leaving only the softest glow
in the hollows of memory.
No inferno lasts forever;
love, too, consumes itself,
transforms, releases.
In the dim light,
we gather what remains,
stories that glimmer in retreat,
hearts still warm
from the heat of what was.
This is not ruin,
but renewal,
the start tucked inside the ending,
a seed beneath scorched ground.
Let us rise,
not from ashes,
but from the warmth that endures
long after the burning has ceased,
carrying light forward,
a promise slow to fade.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.



Comments (4)
Wonderfully written. Excellent poem!
Well-wrought! You brought the metaphor full circle in the most delightful way!
“endings arrive like embers” - stunning visual, Tim!
I love the idea of renewal and rising from the warmth. Beautifully written