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When the mask comes off

A poem about a hidden personality

By Cheryl E PrestonPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
When the mask comes off
Photo by RECEP TİRYAKİ on Unsplash

Every Sunday he was an usher in church

One of the few faithful teens

But there was something beneath his smile

That could be felt but never seen

He was complimented on his manners

Always told he was being polite

Yet the smile that lit up the room

Held a secret darker than night

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Behind the mask of meekness

And speech that was soft and low

His eyes suggested that if

You pushed him, he would blow

The young man joined the military

Returned home brave and strong

The mask began to come off

It did not take very long

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He became a doting father

His family was so proud

They missed that his quiet demeanor

Was screaming for help out loud

He was praised as a wonderful dad

Who treated his children well

But his two baby mamas

Had a different story to tell

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Behind closed doors, they found

The church boy persona was only a ruse

Each mother of his children filed charges

Against him for physical domestic abuse

He seemed so gentle,

So friendly and mild

No one knew he harbored

A wounded inner child

Mental Health

About the Creator

Cheryl E Preston

Cheryl enjoys writing about current events, soap spoilers and baby boomer nostalgia. Tips are greatly appreciated.

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  • Carol Ann Townend4 months ago

    You can't see behind a mask, just as you can't see behind closed doors. This reminded me of why I'm cautious and protective with myself. Well done on this very important message, Cheryl.

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