When the Last Fire Breathes Out
poem about endings, written in the light of a fading flame

There’s a moment—quiet as breath—
when the fire forgets
how to rise.
It leans back into itself,
a tired dancer folding at the waist,
gold melting into ember-red,
ember-red softening into ash-gray.
In that glow, I watch the end
arrive without announcement,
like someone closing a door
with careful fingers
so no one wakes.
The flame flickers again—
a small rebellion,
a final insistence
that it once lived bright.
Then it settles,
as all things must,
finding its last language
in the hush of cooling air.
I think about how endings come:
sometimes like storms,
sometimes like sparks,
but more often
like this—
a soft unraveling of heat,
a slow release of all we held
and all we tried to keep burning.
The fire teaches me that nothing
truly disappears.
It only shifts form—
light to smoke,
smoke to memory,
memory to the quiet warmth
we carry long after
the flames are gone.
As the final glow collapses,
I stay.
I watch.
I let the silence settle
over the last red pulse.
And in that dim, tender dark,
I understand:
Endings are not the moment
things stop—
they’re the moment
we choose to see what remains.
Tonight, as the last fire breathes out,
I gather its faint, fading heat,
and hold it like a promise—
that what burns down
can still become
the beginning
of something new.
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Waqar Khan
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