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When the Forest Held Its Breath

A haunting free verse poem about silence in the forest

By Aurora HillPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
When the Forest Held Its Breath
Photo by Rosie Sun on Unsplash

The forest inhales—

.

no,

not chance,

not wind,

but ribs drawn tight,

branches locked mid-breath.

.

I stop.

Or the path stops me.

Or the hush—

fine as spider silk—

threads itself across my mouth.

I taste dust,

a dryness older than bark,

older than birdsong.

.

No wingbeat,

no leaf.

Even the air refuses to move.

My shoe grinds into the dirt

too loud,

too human,

and my pulse

becomes the only creature

daring to stir.

.

Then—

a rustle,

faint, like a throat clearing,

like someone deciding

whether to speak.

.

The forest exhales.

.

Slow.

Deliberate.

Not release,

not forgiveness—

only the suggestion

that it might

let me go.

Free Verse

About the Creator

Aurora Hill

Supernatural thriller & short story writer. Easily distracted by pet stories - my two German Shepherds are basically co-writers. Find me and the dogs on Twitch for writing sprints!

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  • Sandy Gillman4 months ago

    I love this. That ending, with it only suggesting it might let you go, is haunting.

  • syed4 months ago

    I love it nice we have to support each other are you agree?

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