When the Forest Held Its Breath
A haunting free verse poem about silence in the forest
By Aurora HillPublished 4 months ago • 1 min read
The forest inhales—
.
no,
not chance,
not wind,
but ribs drawn tight,
branches locked mid-breath.
.
I stop.
Or the path stops me.
Or the hush—
fine as spider silk—
threads itself across my mouth.
I taste dust,
a dryness older than bark,
older than birdsong.
.
No wingbeat,
no leaf.
Even the air refuses to move.
My shoe grinds into the dirt
too loud,
too human,
and my pulse
becomes the only creature
daring to stir.
.
Then—
a rustle,
faint, like a throat clearing,
like someone deciding
whether to speak.
.
The forest exhales.
.
Slow.
Deliberate.
Not release,
not forgiveness—
only the suggestion
that it might
let me go.
Comments (2)
I love this. That ending, with it only suggesting it might let you go, is haunting.
I love it nice we have to support each other are you agree?