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When the Ceiling Has Its Eyes Peeled

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By Rowan Finley Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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I don’t hear the ticking of a clock because I don’t have one that ticks.

My clock is silent and deadly, especially when my alarm goes off,

and I realize I have to get up and go to work.

So, my clock is a jerk in a way!

But, today, I think of you.

I wonder what really makes you smile,

I wonder what it’d be like to hold your hand and walk just one wonderful mile.

I wonder what your type is and guess that you probably like the sophisticated type of person,

I don’t think I’m that at all,

but dreaming doesn’t hurt anything, now does it?

Stream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Colleen Waltersabout a year ago

    You can be anything you want to be, the perfect type is someone who understands you and loves you with truth. Daydreaming is my specialty, it seems lol

  • Maryam Batoolabout a year ago

    I mean, yes! Daydreaming won't hurt 😄

  • Komalabout a year ago

    This is such a fun and relatable piece! But hell the clock with no ticking sound —I want this clock😬. Who doesn’t love a little daydream about being someone’s perfect type? Definitely smiling at this one!

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