When Moon Steals the Spotlight
A cosmic mischief
Sun wants a selfie
Moon photobombs with a grin-
Sky pulls the curtains
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Natacha Pierre
I'm a physician & world traveler, but those two things don't define me. What I truly am is passionately curious and a chaser of awe, which has led me to many unique paths in life. And writing about my adventures & insights brings me flow.
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
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Sun wants a selfie, - sky pulls the curtain - Nicely Done Haiku!
Congrats! Ah, that cheeky moon!
Fabulous… so cute & clever … I love this. Well deserved placing.🤩
This is an incredible haiku and it's wonderfully humorous. Congratulations on your win!!
A fun entry! Congratulations!
Awesome!!! Congratulations on the runner up win!!!❤️❤️💕
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Great eclipse-themed haiku. A wonder to behold. Congratulations on your win.
well done
I've witnessed two solar eclipse in my life so far (NYC and Dallas) and they were nothing short of awe-inducing! Those experiences will never escape my cerebrum. Now, shall I write about the Northern Lights I also experienced. Hmm.