When Light Forgot My Name
A sonnet about the moments when love fades, yet its echo still glows in the dark.
I walked where golden afternoons once stayed,
Their whispers clung like sunlight to the leaves.
But dusk arrived—the tender hues decayed,
And silence hummed beneath the sighing eaves.
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Your voice, once warm, became a distant shore,
A fading spark that trembled into grey.
I lit my heart, but shadows asked for more,
And love grew quiet, learning how to stay.
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For every flame must learn its ash in time,
Each dawn must trade its promise for the night.
I lost your hand—yet still, in thought’s soft rhyme,
You bloom between my sorrow and the light.
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So let the dark remember what I knew:
That even loss can make the heart shine true.
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Comments (13)
Beautiful. "Their whispers clung like sunlight to the leaves," What a wonderful mix of sound and light sensory images. The whole poem is a delight.
Sad, but very beautiful.
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A time for everything.
Beautifully sad yet insightful with a splash of hope- I love the imagery and interwoven self-reflection; This line and so many others- "You bloom between my sorrow and the light" - captures and unifies the tone so well!
Beautiful poem. Well-done!
I enjoyed this beautiful poem.
wow this is a beautiful light vs darkness sonnet. Great entry indeed
I love this so much! Beautiful rhyme, meter, and imagery. This should have been a top story. 💜 I subscribed.
""For every flame must learn its ash in time,"" Ooh, that's absolutely delightful. Fantastic work.
So very Beautiful 🦋♦️🦋
Wow! This was so beautifully written! I love it! 💯 ❤️
This is so elegant and heartfelt. The imagery of fading light and love turning quiet is just beautiful.