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When Light Forgot My Name

A sonnet about the moments when love fades, yet its echo still glows in the dark.

By AarishPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
When Light Forgot My Name
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I walked where golden afternoons once stayed,

Their whispers clung like sunlight to the leaves.

But dusk arrived—the tender hues decayed,

And silence hummed beneath the sighing eaves.

___________*

Your voice, once warm, became a distant shore,

A fading spark that trembled into grey.

I lit my heart, but shadows asked for more,

And love grew quiet, learning how to stay.

___________*

For every flame must learn its ash in time,

Each dawn must trade its promise for the night.

I lost your hand—yet still, in thought’s soft rhyme,

You bloom between my sorrow and the light.

____________*

So let the dark remember what I knew:

That even loss can make the heart shine true.

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  • Terry Roe30 days ago

    Beautiful. "Their whispers clung like sunlight to the leaves," What a wonderful mix of sound and light sensory images. The whole poem is a delight.

  • Sad, but very beautiful.

  • ♥️

  • Jamye Sharp3 months ago

    A time for everything.

  • Sarah Lenn3 months ago

    Beautifully sad yet insightful with a splash of hope- I love the imagery and interwoven self-reflection; This line and so many others- "You bloom between my sorrow and the light" - captures and unifies the tone so well!

  • Shirley Belk3 months ago

    Beautiful poem. Well-done!

  • Pamela Williams3 months ago

    I enjoyed this beautiful poem.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji3 months ago

    wow this is a beautiful light vs darkness sonnet. Great entry indeed

  • Julie Lacksonen3 months ago

    I love this so much! Beautiful rhyme, meter, and imagery. This should have been a top story. 💜 I subscribed.

  • Thomas Speer3 months ago

    ""For every flame must learn its ash in time,"" Ooh, that's absolutely delightful. Fantastic work.

  • Marie381Uk 3 months ago

    So very Beautiful 🦋♦️🦋

  • Wow! This was so beautifully written! I love it! 💯 ❤️

  • Sandy Gillman3 months ago

    This is so elegant and heartfelt. The imagery of fading light and love turning quiet is just beautiful.

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