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The Edge of Forward

A Breath of Life and a Bring of Becoming

By AarishPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
The Edge of Forward
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It begins as a hush —

a silence that isn’t silence,

but the breath the world takes

before it decides to move again.

_______

The asphalt tilts forward.

an ancient spine bending under time,

and I feel something deep beneath it —

the pulse of everything that ever dared to change.

_______

Even the wind holds its breath.

Even the birds hang midair.

This is the part of the story

where the ground pretends it’s still there,

but it’s already falling away.

_______

The road narrows, then curves.

like a thought I’m not ready to finish.

I keep walking anyway —

not because I’m brave,

but because gravity doesn’t ask for courage.

_______

Somewhere beneath the concrete and clay,

the bedrock remembers

every step that brought me here —

the roads I turned from,

the roads that turned from me.

_______

And here I am —

toes on the lip of momentum,

heart pressed against the ribs of the unknown,

watching the horizon bow toward me.

_______

This is the tilt.

This is the drop.

And whether I leap or stumble,

whether I rise or break —

I am already moving forward.

_______***

This poem was created in response to the “The Road Drops Here” prompt.

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  • Julie Lacksonen3 months ago

    This should have been among the winners, or at least RU or HM. So well thought out and written. 💜

  • A lovely take on the challenge… I especially like: “ Even the wind holds its breath. Even the birds hang midair. This is the part of the story where the ground pretends it’s still there, but it’s already falling away.”

  • Sandy Gillman3 months ago

    This is gorgeous, I love how it builds so gently and then just tips you forward at the end.

  • Pamela Williams3 months ago

    "The edge of forward." I like the way this poem describes a place that isn't physical, yet so real.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji3 months ago

    great imagery to describe aging and passage of time/moving forward

  • Hannah Moore3 months ago

    Gravity doesnt ask for courage. I think this might well become a saying for me.

  • Caitlin Charlton3 months ago

    I like how you described the asphalt as something ancient and bending. Such a scary imagery with the birds and the fact that the ground is pretending to be there. Thats true. Gravity doesn't ask for courage. The roads that turned from you. That's heartbreaking. Such a hopeful ending. Awesome work! 🤗❤️

  • Mariann Carroll3 months ago

    Sometimes in life you have to take the leap of faith. The uncertainty of life this poem conveyed, excellent creation.

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