The Edge of Forward
A Breath of Life and a Bring of Becoming
It begins as a hush —
a silence that isn’t silence,
but the breath the world takes
before it decides to move again.
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The asphalt tilts forward.
an ancient spine bending under time,
and I feel something deep beneath it —
the pulse of everything that ever dared to change.
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Even the wind holds its breath.
Even the birds hang midair.
This is the part of the story
where the ground pretends it’s still there,
but it’s already falling away.
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The road narrows, then curves.
like a thought I’m not ready to finish.
I keep walking anyway —
not because I’m brave,
but because gravity doesn’t ask for courage.
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Somewhere beneath the concrete and clay,
the bedrock remembers
every step that brought me here —
the roads I turned from,
the roads that turned from me.
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And here I am —
toes on the lip of momentum,
heart pressed against the ribs of the unknown,
watching the horizon bow toward me.
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This is the tilt.
This is the drop.
And whether I leap or stumble,
whether I rise or break —
I am already moving forward.
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This poem was created in response to the “The Road Drops Here” prompt.
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Comments (8)
This should have been among the winners, or at least RU or HM. So well thought out and written. 💜
A lovely take on the challenge… I especially like: “ Even the wind holds its breath. Even the birds hang midair. This is the part of the story where the ground pretends it’s still there, but it’s already falling away.”
This is gorgeous, I love how it builds so gently and then just tips you forward at the end.
"The edge of forward." I like the way this poem describes a place that isn't physical, yet so real.
great imagery to describe aging and passage of time/moving forward
Gravity doesnt ask for courage. I think this might well become a saying for me.
I like how you described the asphalt as something ancient and bending. Such a scary imagery with the birds and the fact that the ground is pretending to be there. Thats true. Gravity doesn't ask for courage. The roads that turned from you. That's heartbreaking. Such a hopeful ending. Awesome work! 🤗❤️
Sometimes in life you have to take the leap of faith. The uncertainty of life this poem conveyed, excellent creation.