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when I stood at my father’s grave

a poem

By Moon DesertPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Photo by The New York Public Library on Unsplash

when I stood at your grave so small

there was nothing around

no taunts filled the air

just pure peacefulness

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this contradiction

it seemed incongruent to me

to all its massiveness

everything you did on Earth

-

no flowers adorned your abode

as usual while

your wife watched over

everything you laid your hand on

-

every little detail you built

every little titbit you demolished

on behalf of the so-called

dealing with childhood wounds

-

your blood was always hot

in your cold heart

extracting false truths

and basing your knowledge on it was irrelevant

-

I hope you are happy now

finally stripped off this dodgy aptitude to destroy

something no creator would ever want

relying solely on the power of their own blood

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for Dad

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Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    Once again, my heart breaks. This sounds as though you suffered twice over for your father: the pain you suffered from his words & hands & the pain you suffered for him witnessing the struggle with his own demons. May he be happy & rest in peace. Just as important to me if not more so, may you be happy, my friend.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Melancholy!!! Left some love!!!❤️❤️💕

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