When I am a poet of you 💓
Poppy's prompt
When you conquer my feelings,
That mesmerisation is not definitional,
The sand resonates with my river bottom of mind,
Parchment sighs staring at me and says,
"Why don't you intoxicate me,
Somnify the softness of the words on me",
A stream of hot anemophilia strikes on me,
Reminds me who you are,
Your eyes were the electric shock,
That accompanied my eyes to the miracle,
The sky heaven sentimentalizes,
"Why my galaxies are not like,
The eyelashes of your love"
I blink at the stars,
Star patterns are over,
But your twinkle is forever,
Don't bounce your lips on my iron cheeks,
My eyes are ecstatic, not to blink at you,
I didn't know such angels could survive on earth,
You are more than the reality,
Unzip my heart and see,
You will find you
About the Creator
Esala Gunathilake
I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.
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Comments (21)
Captivating poem, and you have composed exceptionally. I wonder why this didn't go to top story!!!
Very heartfelt poem. Strong feelings expressed in a magical way.
Nice info.
Dear son, It is great poem. Touching and going deeper reflecting human feelings.
Such a passionate poetry. Great work Esala!
Beautiful lines👍🏻
Great story
“Unzip my heart and see,” woahhh ❤️love that line!!!!
beautiful,
You are pouring your heart out 🥶
WOW! Fabulous work!
Lovely poem!!!!!
Lovely !!!!
That is awesome Those last two words are powerful
'Star patterns are over, But your twinkle is forever,' Those were my favourite lines until I got to the last two which blew me away!
Awww, this was so lovely! Such a wonderful poem!
What a great love poem, Esala!
Mesmerizingly poetic.
Oh, this is such a dreamy whirlwind of emotions! Love mixed with nature metaphors and a sprinkle of celestial vibes—it's like a poetic daydream. That "unzip my heart and see, you will find you" line? Total knockout. Romantic, soulful, and overflowing with feels!✨
SUPERB!!!
Excellent