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When first...

my child

By Marie McGrathPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
When first...
Photo by Manuel Schinner on Unsplash

When my child first stirred

I loosed the barbs that bound my heart

And raised my arms to catch the miracle.

When my child first breathed

The words I spoke fell blissfully

In a language I had never known.

When my child first walked

My steps quickened in a surfeit of joy

And I raised my arms to catch the magic.

When my child first loved

I held her heart in mine

Bade her my joy

And loosed the threads that held her tight.

Still I long to bid her stay.

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About the Creator

Marie McGrath

Things that have saved me:

Animals

Music

Sense of Humor

Writing

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  • Katherine D. Graham12 months ago

    what a beautiful poem of caring for a child and letting go... this poem speaks to a profound knowledge of love - as always-- lovely!

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