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What’s in a Head Within a Blue Page

Five Mantinades

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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What’s in a head within a blue page that never seems to end?

Anthi smiles and turns the page much bluer near the inner bend.

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What’s in a head within a gold page that never seems to age?

Goddess Athena turns the page to prepare for the next stage.

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What’s in a head within a green page that never seems to grow?

A tall tree cannot strive to become taller even below.

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What’s in a head within a yellow page that never looks old?

A series of lies from times when legends as true facts were told.

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What’s in a head within a white page that tends to spell each M?

A never-ending need to count each blue-and-white flower stem.

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A mantinada typically consists of a Cretan 15-syllable rhyming couplet. Mantinades is the plural.

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Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    I've never heard of this form before. You executed it brilliantly!

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