A butchered heart kept in secret
A held ache craving reunion
A question I stopped asking
A plea I ceased making
Hell thrives on anguish
Healing weeps me
Hid him deep
Hummed my
Hush...
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Comments (6)
I lingered on "a held ache" 😁
Somehow you twist in "Hell thrives on anguish" and "AAAAHHHHH" in the span of nine lines and in so doing leave exhaling at last!
Ooooof, this is amazing. Creative, clever, and true. Reading this felt like a big "AAAAHHHHH" release!! Brilliant, Dani! 💖💗
Brilliantly crafted
Oooo, an Acrostic of "Aaaahhhhh"! That's bloody brilliant!
Awesome. Acrostic, and a nonet - genius! 💕😊👋