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What Happens

is supposed to stay there

By BrenPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read

i dreamt i was in vegas

with a pocket full of chips

i was with a strikingly beautiful goth girl

who had a piercing in all her lips

we took dinner and a show

then we hit the slots

and just for the briefest of moments in time

we were the biggest shots

i dreamt i was playing blackjack

every single hand i drew was twenty one

i had a thousand dollar bill in one boot

in the other a small but lethal gun

i hit every jackpot in the place

they comp'd me the penthouse suite

i did angels on a bed of chips and cash

smiling as is i drifted off to sleep

i dreamt that i dreamt that i was crucified

i was bundled from my bed in the night

bound gagged and blindfolded

and dragged off away from the light

in this dream i was tortured and abused

in ways i dare not speak of here

they took me to the edge of town

and showed me some more of my fear

so this is how my end plays out

my rise, my fall, my decline

they took me to the edge of town

and nailed me to the Welcome to Las Vegas sign

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Really, *all* her lips 😱

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Was gonna say sounds like a fun day lol then.. uh maybe not such fun after-all!! Excellent narrative style poem! Well done!

  • Kristen Balyeat2 years ago

    What a journey this was! Awesome piece, Brenton! 💫

  • Whoaaaa! Now that's sooo cool! Tragic and scary but cool! Lol!

  • Matthew J. Fromm2 years ago

    ooo this is trippy, great work.

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    "I dreamt that I dreamt..." and down the rabbit hole we go. From elation to terror in a heartbeat!

  • Sounds about right. The Rise and Fall of the Vegas Empire. Very interesting. Nice job mate. 😎🍷🤙🏻🍷😀🍷🧐😏😔😟😣😤😳😳😭

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I enjoyed the fullness of this - there's a whole story to take away.

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    This...is interesting, evocative, exciting and then terrifying...what a wonderful journey of nightmarish proportions you took us through, Brenton!

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