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Welcomed Sun

Surging

By Jerry SalcedoPublished 4 years ago 1 min read

My morning was welcomed by the sun surging through the clouds

The clouds put up a fight but the sun won’t back down

Unconquerable;

As to is the soul

As the sun welcomed me onto its playground,

The thoughts that begin in my head are about my future

Coalescing my energy and the suns will

I’ll nurture the willow trees on my ancestral hill

A Spring sun is springing the seeds of love

My super power is empowering me do what the doves do

Fly aimlessly although indomitable purpose is what carries leaping wings

Learning to fly is no easy feat

Especially for a human diseased with an illness called thinking...

surreal poetry

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