love is lost,
at what cost?,
pain is deep, I,
weep, weep, weep;
was just one time,
but you were mine,
we were fine, now,
weep, weep, weep;
so it’s done,
we’re no more fun,
you need to run, and,
weep, weep, weep!!
a little heartache poem this morning, sad to say, it happens thanks for the read
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Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
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Comments (11)
Sad poem but very sensational 🥰
😭. The repetition of “weep weep weep” really hits hard! Beautiful poem!
Ooof, this hit me hard! So emotional! Awesome poem!
Loved the rhymes and the way this was whimsical and heartbroken at the same time
Sending hugs for these excellent heartfelt words
Way to let it out, buddy! Great poem!
Well done!!!!
So emotional, Moe 🥹❤️ Very well done ❤️
Nice😞❤️
Hi Moe! Working to catch up on my reading and saw this gem! Touching, deep, and so powerful! Wonderfully done
Nicely done, but sad.