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Waxing & Waning

A shaped poem

By Alison McBainPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in Letters to the Moon Challenge
Waxing & Waning
Photo by Mark Tegethoff on Unsplash
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Time will sprint

with laughter, but unhealing pain

slows it to a whale’s pace, a crawl along ocean

floors, a century passing in each flash of withdrawal,

moments arbitrarily assigned to seconds, minutes, hours—

the bitter moon’s long blink morphed into a hummingbird’s flap,

the speeding up and glacial freezing of relativity sprung free from

maths and methods with the unwinking eye of Sauron’s gaze. Tell me,

oh goddesses of tides and nights—tell me, Amesemi and Mama Killa,

tell me, Chang’e and Myeongwol, tell me, Anumati and Selardi,

tell me, Artemis and Diana—in your perch atop the world, do

you see where we have fallen far from your song and light?

We cannot worship the dust of the past or unmake

mistakes or unsee massacres, but we might move

forward and heal better here and now

with the cold, white light of your

shy reflections, so pure and

sad and faded.

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Author's note: "Waxing & Waning" is meant to be a shaped poem that resembles the full moon, thus the image at the beginning is to show how this poem should look instead of the text being left-justified.

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About the Creator

Alison McBain

Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/

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  • Aarsh Malik2 months ago

    The contrast between time sprinting and slowing to a crawl is so vivid. It perfectly captures how pain and healing distort our sense of reality.

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Simply Beautiful. Thankyou for sharing and congratulations on Top Story xx

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 months ago

    Brilliant!! Love the use of the poem's shape - and the Sauron reference. :) Congrats on the Top Story for this lovely, very clever piece!

  • Pamela Williams2 months ago

    Very Nice!!

  • Sean A.2 months ago

    Well done! Great phrasing and work to get the shape down so well

  • very impressive

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    Lovely poem full of great lines... Loved it!

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