beneath the Banyan tree
fairies dance to King Orochi’s harp
but Kijimuna creeps closer
and the demon slips inside
to quiet whispers,
whispering into her dreams
when she wakes
cherry blossoms weep for her
caution skates away
and samurai drowse
beneath canopies gleaming golden,
gold harp-song of Orochi
but she—
she is gone
far beyond the roots of
the Banyan tree
twilight is toppling, rushed,
brushed with tempests
*
years fall by—
*
Orochi's grief
muted by neglect
becomes clothed in a cascade
of sullen notes
before fairies pass by, hunting,
a’hunting their favorite prey
unnoticed by Orochi
the flotsam of a woman
unbound
washes ashore—
a queen once,
once loved by a king
Author's Note: This poem is based on the legend of Sir Orfeo, but I wanted to add a Japanese flair and tragedy to it, and so added kijimuna, which are small wood sprites, and named the king Orochi, which is an eight-headed serpent from Japanese mythology.
About the Creator
Alison McBain
Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/
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The research and thought behind this poem is so impressive. And the result is such a beautiful poem that I somehow got fully lost in and taken away with the kijimuna. Congratulations on yet another stellar entry!