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Lost Under a Golden Song

A poem of the hunt

By Alison McBainPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Lost Under a Golden Song
Photo by Alain Bonnardeaux on Unsplash

beneath the Banyan tree

fairies dance to King Orochi’s harp

but Kijimuna creeps closer

and the demon slips inside

to quiet whispers,

whispering into her dreams

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when she wakes

cherry blossoms weep for her

caution skates away

and samurai drowse

beneath canopies gleaming golden,

gold harp-song of Orochi

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but she—

she is gone

far beyond the roots of

the Banyan tree

twilight is toppling, rushed,

brushed with tempests

*

years fall by—

*

Orochi's grief

muted by neglect

becomes clothed in a cascade

of sullen notes

before fairies pass by, hunting,

a’hunting their favorite prey

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unnoticed by Orochi

the flotsam of a woman

unbound

washes ashore—

a queen once,

once loved by a king

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Author's Note: This poem is based on the legend of Sir Orfeo, but I wanted to add a Japanese flair and tragedy to it, and so added kijimuna, which are small wood sprites, and named the king Orochi, which is an eight-headed serpent from Japanese mythology.

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About the Creator

Alison McBain

Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/

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  • Sarah O'Grady3 months ago

    The research and thought behind this poem is so impressive. And the result is such a beautiful poem that I somehow got fully lost in and taken away with the kijimuna. Congratulations on yet another stellar entry!

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