I open
the tap
and it runs
clear.
*
A sound
fills the air
but I
hardly notice
until the pipes
start to groan.
*
It gathers
in a glass,
to keep me
healthy and alive.
*
You don’t
really think
about it that
way, though.
*
You know it
as fact, but it’s
not the first thing
that comes to mind
when you think of
water.
*
Instead, you think:
*
It clings
to my skin
and soaks my
clothes.
*
It can be
warm
or it can be
cold.
*
It can be
peaceful
but it can rage
like a storm.
*
It houses
fish and other
aquatic creatures.
*
It can kill
but
it can also
save.
*
Give or take,
good or bad,
we need water
and that’s just
a fact.
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Comments (4)
Oh yes, it can kill or save. Loved your poem!
I love that you show both sides of water and that it's a love/hate thing. Very well written.
Wow... the melancholic double edged sword of water. "It can kill but also save"...... love this, Luna!!!
Amazing