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Watching the Day Melt Away

Sunset

By Dawn SaloisPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

I will likely never be rich or famous

Those things do not bring happiness, anyway

True happiness is won through learning

To feel gratitude for what you have each day

I do not live on the beach

But it’s only a few minutes away

I do not live in the mountains

But I can be there and back in a day

I have a vaulted ceiling in my living room

With a large glass door facing west

I cannot see the sunrise each morning

But I believe the view I have is the best

When the day’s work is done

I have my own sanctuary

I can enjoy the evening air

The view is quite extraordinary

I can see the beautiful sunset

Painted in the warmest colors

As the sun retreats to the horizon

I am a witness to its wonders

inspirational

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Dawn Salois

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  • KJ Aartila3 years ago

    Sounds wonderful - I'd go there! 💕

  • Nice! Thank you💖

  • This was so beautiful. Comfort and happiness comes from being grateful for what we have. And your pic is stunning! I was so shocked it's a Nightcafe creation. It looked so real!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    So descriptive, calm, and beautiful, loving it!!!

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