
The violins breathe smoke tonight.
We circle the edges of warmth,
pretending not to see the ash beneath our feet.
Your hand finds mine-soft, deliberate-
and the world folds inward,
like a curtain drawn against the stars.
The fire hums a slower song,
each note a promise dressed as mercy.
We sway in rhythm with our undoing,
our shadows kissing before we do.
Heat curls around the hems of our clothes,
gold and grief stitched into the same thread.
Now the room is only light.
Our steps dissolve into sparks.
Still, we turn-
beautiful in the burning,
faithful to the final measure,
as if ruin were a kind of grace.
About the Creator
The Omnichromiter
I write stories like spells—soft at the edges, sharp underneath. My poems are curses in lace, lullabies that bite back. I don’t believe in happily ever after. I believe in survival, transformation; in burning and blooming at the same time.
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I love this poem. My name is Bill. Pleased to meet you. I've subscribed to you. ⚡️💙⚡️
gold and grief stitched into the same thread - love that!
This is gorgeous! Intimate and utterly hypnotic. I love how you make destruction feel almost tender. That “faithful to the final measure” hits like a secret between flames and hearts. ✨