Waiting at the Bus Stop
For the Frosted Verse Challenge
Waiting at the bus stop
swaying and bobbing on my heels
moisture collecting with every breath
a warm scarf hugging my neck
my eyes scan the white, powdery sky
excitement electrifying my bones -
maybe today, I'll see snow!
The roar of the engine comes up the hill
and I tighten the straps upon my back,
breaks squeal and the yellow doors swing open
and I reach out to the railing, pausing momentarily
as my eyes widen upon the magical shimmer
on the metal surface -
the fractal white crystal of winter's first frost
greeting my naked hands with a sharp burst -
maybe today there won't be snow,
but at least I know it's on its way!
About the Creator
Amanda Starks
Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!
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Comments (5)
This captured such wonder and anticipation! Really well done! Resonated with me even as an adult since I’m a teacher that loves a snow day
Love this
Oh wow, your imageries were so vivid and evocative! Loved your poem!
Delightful frost poem!
Very realistic! Great frost poem.