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Waiting at the Bus Stop

For the Frosted Verse Challenge

By Amanda StarksPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Waiting at the Bus Stop
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Waiting at the bus stop

swaying and bobbing on my heels

moisture collecting with every breath

a warm scarf hugging my neck

my eyes scan the white, powdery sky

excitement electrifying my bones -

maybe today, I'll see snow!

The roar of the engine comes up the hill

and I tighten the straps upon my back,

breaks squeal and the yellow doors swing open

and I reach out to the railing, pausing momentarily

as my eyes widen upon the magical shimmer

on the metal surface -

the fractal white crystal of winter's first frost

greeting my naked hands with a sharp burst -

maybe today there won't be snow,

but at least I know it's on its way!

childrens poetryFree Verse

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Amanda Starks

Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    This captured such wonder and anticipation! Really well done! Resonated with me even as an adult since I’m a teacher that loves a snow day

  • Oh wow, your imageries were so vivid and evocative! Loved your poem!

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    Delightful frost poem!

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Very realistic! Great frost poem.

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