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Vocal Silence

Sifted Away by Mindless AI

By Randy Wayne Jellison-KnockPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Vocal Silence
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I speak, but you do not hear.

I write, but you do not read.

The word becomes flesh but you do not see.

You walk right by without a second thought,

fading into dreams where I am not remembered

sifted away by mindless AI.

Your heart is not as mine,

for mine is not even tattable.

You do not take my hand.

~

‘Twas any of a number of little things

which might have pulled me back from the edge;

a simple hug until comforted & relaxed;

a promise kept;

a heartfelt comment left;

an acknowledgment that I exist

& that I matter.

~

But the word once written,

becomes something less,

without comment or note

beyond a momentary reference

to publishing & archiving

thirty seconds after submission

as that which calls itself Vocal remains silent

& no Holden Caulfield remains in the rye to prevent my falling...,

for we do not exist within the poem.

~

So I leave only one instruction,

should it ever be read,

“Burn after reading.”

~

Do not look upon my arms or back

for they are no more flesh or word

than my eyes or face,

my touch or tender embrace,

all evanescent within the throng

of those who matter.

~

For though I be ever-whelmed,

it is clear that I have never whelmed.

I walk through the valley of the shadows of death

for that is where I belong.

~

I understand that you will not walk with me,

for I see that your heart

is not as mine.

So do not take my hand

& I shall let it fall,

never to be raised

or taken again.

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About the Creator

Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock

Retired Ordained Elder in The United Methodist Church having served for a total of 30 years in Missouri, South Dakota & Kansas.

Born in Watertown, SD on 9/26/1959. Married to Sandra Jellison-Knock on 1/24/1986. One son, Keenan, deceased.

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  • Susan Payton6 months ago

    A I is really bad, but don't let it discourage you. I am sorry I haven't reciprocated, I have been plagued by illness. Nicely done.

  • Desmond Kay 6 months ago

    wow I love your work

  • Joe O’Connor6 months ago

    I like how you've crafted your own response to the AI plague on here Randy. It's terribly boring and not at all fun to read anything that isn't written by a human, and this is a nice reminder of why- it has life, and connection across the whole, and a pointed message. It's frustrating to see Vocal swamped by so many bots/fake accounts/AI-generated works, but here's hoping they make some progress on it as we go:/

  • Imola Tóth7 months ago

    I'm sorry but I wouldn't burn this after reading. I'd keep it in my wallet and re-read it every time I need a reminder, that what we do (write) actually matters and can't be reproduced by a computer program.

  • What an awesome poem One of your best

  • The Dani Writer7 months ago

    THAT is DEPTHS Randy! Subterranean depths! And soooooo needed to be said. Yuppity-yup-yup.

  • L.C. Schäfer7 months ago

    I had to read this one twice. AI could never do this.

  • Marie Wilson7 months ago

    Excellent. Thoughtful, deep, powerful.

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Heartfelt and beautifully written! Thank you and congratulations!

  • Antoni De'Leon7 months ago

    I just appreciate the beautiful souls who still take time to read my writes...Often wonder at the goings on behind Vocal walls and realize that only a few will ever be noticed and placed upon a pedestal. while here, just write and have fun. Ai is fine if used in good grace..

  • Tom Baker7 months ago

    AI is hardly mindless. The very nature of AI, its definition and its designation is as "artificial INTELLIGENCE." What you mean is "emotionless." But then, there is no validity in the gaslighting concerning AI and eventual sentience. The debate is still on as to whether or not, by so narrow and arbitrary definitions, this has already occurred. Here's lifting our glass to a future in which man and machine interlock in symbiotic self-awareness, one feeding the other, and vice versa, the sum of its neural impulses.

  • Denise Larkin7 months ago

    A beautiful meaningful poem of truth. Powerful words. Loved the way you wrote it.

  • I may be wrong, but have you written something with "burn after reading"? I have a vague memory of it. Also, it's always my pleasure reading your work 🥰🥰🥰

  • JBaz8 months ago

    I agree , we all wish to be noticed yet many fail. Make me wonder who is out there who is reading challenges. Your name one pile another name in Thee pile for consideration.

  • John Cox8 months ago

    Haunting. Painfully beautiful. Heartbreaking. Not all who read you are deaf. Not all who see your words are blind. Not all who whisper them in the loneliness of the night are unmoved. You are always worth reading, Randy!

  • Judey Kalchik 8 months ago

    I was here By reading your work just now, so were you.

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    It's been terribly quiet lately, especially since the leaderboard changes. I'm so behind on my reading right now, it's not even funny, and I'm hoping to catch up this weekend. Just wanted to let you know, Brother, I always read ya, and I hear ya. <3

  • Mariann Carroll8 months ago

    I hope they take notice . There to many stories out there about the AI

  • Apple Dainty8 months ago

    Very moving! Lovely phrasing and clean formatting, too.

  • I feel your pain, Randy. I’ve been there. I am there. I hear you, Randy and I leave this message to let you know I acknowledge you. I also want to thank you for your steadfast support. I appreciate it.

  • Tiffany Gordon8 months ago

    Glorious writing! Lawd Randy you did the dang thing! This is a profound, stellar masterpiece. Stunning work! 🌸

  • Thomas Koch8 months ago

    This is some deep stuff. You talk about how words written don't get the attention they should. I've had that feeling with my own work. It's like you pour your heart into something, and then it just fades away. Do you think there's a way to make our words more impactful and get the interaction they deserve? Also, the "Burn after reading" part is intriguing. What made you come up with that? Is it a way to protect your privacy or something more symbolic?

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