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Vine Fetters

Somewhere Between Here and There

By Moon DesertPublished 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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I walked through a vineyard once;

the vines’ branches snagged my feet.

Trapped, shunned, and stunned,

visualizing my helpless fall.

My shame, caught in a frame,

sun-scorched, rain-lashed, I'm to blame.

Cruel fate, a relentless hand,

no respite found, no promised land.

Halted midstream,

midlife's halfway point,

journey's midpoint found,

the old shed mocks me.

I'm stuck here, my feet rooted to the spot,

my shoes are gone, I can't go on, not

halfway there, I'm feeling withdrawn,

but I'll arrive soon, that's a given, I'm sworn.

I must shift my gear now,

as clinging vines mock my plight,

their leering gaze - a constant sight.

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Thank you for reading!

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About the Creator

Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

Where the wild roses grow full of words...

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  • Euan Brennan7 months ago

    Your poetry is always sublime, Maggie! Well-written.

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