Vine Fetters
Somewhere Between Here and There

I walked through a vineyard once;
the vines’ branches snagged my feet.
Trapped, shunned, and stunned,
visualizing my helpless fall.
My shame, caught in a frame,
sun-scorched, rain-lashed, I'm to blame.
Cruel fate, a relentless hand,
no respite found, no promised land.
Halted midstream,
midlife's halfway point,
journey's midpoint found,
the old shed mocks me.
I'm stuck here, my feet rooted to the spot,
my shoes are gone, I can't go on, not
halfway there, I'm feeling withdrawn,
but I'll arrive soon, that's a given, I'm sworn.
I must shift my gear now,
as clinging vines mock my plight,
their leering gaze - a constant sight.
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About the Creator
Moon Desert
UK-based
BA in Cultural Studies
Crime Fiction: Love
Poetry: Friend
Psychology: Salvation
Where the wild roses grow full of words...
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Your poetry is always sublime, Maggie! Well-written.