Coddled children
Crush console
Candy
…
Viciously vicarious
Video vendors
Vie
…
Ravenously raging
Reality ruinously
Rent
…
Freedom flung
Far, fast
Furious
…
War wearied
Warriors
Weep
…
Society sinks
Stability
Shattered
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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Comments (4)
Lol, I accidentally read as "society stinks" 🤣🤣🤣 I loved your mini sets of Tautograms!
Very cleverly written Andrew. It holds an important message. Well done.
This poem is a stark commentary on the disquieting facets of our world. Its Remarkable!
Fantastic social commentary!!!💕❤️❤️