Vessels
A Journey Through Storms, Scars, and the Unseen Hands That Guide Us Home

Shaped by hands unseen, we rise,
Crafted from earth, sea, and skies.
Hollow within, yet full of weight,
We carry hope, we shoulder fate.
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Some are forged in golden light,
Sleek and proud, a graceful sight.
Others bear the marks of toil,
Streaked with salt and marred by soil.
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Through endless waters, still we go,
Chasing currents, fast or slow.
Each passage carved upon our skin,
A tale of where, a tale of when.
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We are not merely what we hold,
Our worth is neither bought nor sold.
Instead, it lies in what we give—
The lives we touch, the love we live.
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And when the winds at last subside,
We’ll find our peace beyond the tide.
Our journeys end, but not in vain,
For what we’ve borne will still remain.
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Comments (4)
This has a marvelous rhythmic flow! A joy to read for sure! Well done!
Others already said it but it is true this is inspirational The words just flow
As Gloria says this is one very inspirational powerful poem. Great work.
Great inspiring poem.